初中英语命题作文真题演练(52):生日聚会

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Dear Betty, Do you remember me? I am Tom,your best friend. First of all, i reviced you invitation and i am very happy.I want to go to your party. Scendly,but i am sorry,i can't do to your party. what's more,my mother was ill,i must care for her and stay at home. Last but not least,happy biestday.