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Dear George I am very glad to hear from you. you ask me how about the household hotel is. I can recommend a household hotel where is in my hometown. if you are one you can book a single room ,it can only cost you thirty yuan a day,it is very chape.if double people, yuo can book a double room ,it can cost you twenty yuan a day.In the household hotel ,you can eat chinese food with the host ,they have a menu and book foods. ALSO, you can make food by youself if you do. you also can wash the seabathing，swim and clumb. For knowing more about CHINA ,you can volunteer to do farm work,in it ,you should get happy about the work.THIS is my hometown of household hotel.I hope it can help you a little .I wish you have a good time in China. youself, LiHua
