2011年12月英语四级作文真题:坚强的意志

文中词汇表达比较多样，能多用学术词汇就更好了；作者句法不错，但是文章整体句子稍微偏短；文章层次不够分明，缺少组织，需注意文章整体的组织结构。

Nothing succeeds without a strong will. Everyone knows that succession needs a strong will. A strong will is an important key and promise to the success. When we set a goal, we must pay more attention to it and do our best. The process on the road may be very hard, which needs us to spend time and patience. The person with a strong will can be a great one, such as Edison and Newton. The old say goes that there is a will,there is a way. As a student, I must put the will into my deep heart and keep chasing the goal. Without a strong will, it is tough to keep studying hard. If we were just saying instead of doing it, we would not win anymore.