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A smart consumer As we all know ,most of us ,as students ,donot have much money .Therefore ,it s very common to see many students collect all kinds of coupons ,and look for group - buy deals if they eat out or travel .what s more ,many students ,especially girls ,buy clothes in a sale .with this phonomennon , some people think that all this may not make us smart consumers.and it s not good for us to develop a nice sense of appreciation .however , different people see same thing in different light .some people also approval of this situation . in my view , all this is good for us ,it will not make us to be a smart consumer . First ,it will enhance our ability of making choice .as we all know , when we eat out ,travel or buy clothes ,we must make choice ,if we do all these things considered all acpets ,it will benefit us .what s more ,we eat out or travel in group .it also strengthen our friendship ,let us know more about each other . Second , it also good for us to master our money .as student ,our money which we spend are come from our family .our money are limit,so we must spent in good methods .in some instance ,its good for us to be a good consumer. In conclusion ,every thing has two coin .however, in my opinion , its advantages overshawed its disadvantages .therefore, what we should do is to avoid its disadvantages and develop its advantages ,in order to a real smart consumer.
