小学一年级英语作文:Good friend

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I have a good friend,she be with me about 15 years. We have met in primary school,we were classmate,we have been together to go to school and leave school. When we were grow up,we still a good friend,we share our life that is bitter sweet and excited. I hope we will be forever friend.