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字数：300 满分：100分
拼写做的很棒，在平时练习中注意词汇量的积累；作者句法知识很棒，适当增加从句的使用，会取得更不错的成绩；缺少组织，上下文衔接稍显不流畅。
The benefits of saving money Nowadays,more and more people are concerning about the financial because of the development of the rapid technology.Some people think that it is enjoyable for them to buy many things with much money.This is a waste of money.I argue that it is beneficial for us to save money. The reasons are as follows.To begin with,as the public,we all have responsibility for helping many poor people.What is more,Saving money is a good habit,which can let us use the rest money to do things we want.Indeed,we don't spend much money from our parents.In addition,we should put something into practice.For instance,we can collect all kinds of coupons as well as spend less money eating and travelling and buy clothes unless in a sale and so on. As far as l am concerned.As long as l persist in saving money,l will get much benefit from the good habit and make a big difference.
