3. 参考词汇:代沟―generation gap
拼写很棒,可适当增加学术词汇的使用;可适当增加复杂句和从句的使用;衔接词汇很少,建议加强过渡词和连接词的积累;连词使用偏少。
Dear Uncle, How are you these days? I’m writing to tell you my trouble with my parents. Now more and more focus on learning.They asked too much on my study, short of their expectations, and often than his and her neighbor's children, let oneself depressed. Watch TV they are not allowed to surf the Internet,Forbore to make friends with the girls.I don't think there is a generation gap with their parents, not very good cooking. Best wishes, Yours, Li Yi