小学一年级英语作文:Good friend

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I have a good friend,She's name is Mimi,She is a beautiful girl,She is very thin and tall,likes a baby.she has short dark hair,She's voice is very big,She is very nice ,has very nice smile,She's english is very good and always help us.She likes swim and run.We are like she very much.