Source: Bureau of Labor Statistics, Current Population Survey.
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As we see, the form tells us that the higher school diploma we have the more salary we get. Why we have this data? I tink there are two main reasons. First, if we get high diploma, it means we pay enough efforts and we know more about our major than others who just have low diploma. There is no doubt we should gain more, so we get higer salary. Just as the old saying goes:" No pains, no gains." Second, we can find reasons from soiety. Nowadays, every country is on the way to develope fast. The country needs the person who get useful knowledge and these person just are those who get high diploma. From this data, we should learn something. If we want to find a job with high salary, we should work hard now.