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Source: Bureau of Labor Statistics, Current Population Survey.
文中词汇表达比较多样，能多用学术词汇就更好了；作者句法不错，但是文章整体句子稍微偏短；文章结构不够严谨，应增加过程性词汇的使用。
As we see, the form tells us that the higher school diploma we have the more salary we get. Why we have these data? I think there are two main reasons. First, if we get high diploma, it means we pay enough efforts and we know more about our major than others who just have low diploma. There is no doubt we should gain more, so we get higher salary. Just as the old saying goes:" No pains, no gains." Second, we can find reasons from society. Nowadays, every country is on the way to develop fast. The country needs the person who gets useful knowledge and these persons just are those who get high diploma. From these data, we should learn something. If we want to find a job with high salary, we should work hard now.
