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作者句法不错，但是文章整体句子稍微偏短；请注意文中用词的丰富度以及单词拼写，学术词汇的希望能更熟练一些；层次不清晰，几乎没有使用衔接词。
Are Dialects Just as Acceptable in Public Places? In our China,there's about fifty-six nations exist in our country.All of them have their own habits and customs and some of them even have their own words.They speak their wors day by day and teach their children how to speak their own words.The poupse is to save their nation and words.These different words calls dialects.In recent days,there's a topic about the dialects wheather can be used in public places.As for me,dialects are the features about our china but they're not officially in public places. On the one hand,dialects belong to our chinese.We are the awaken lion to the east.W had got a lot of advancements in different period and there still have a lot of things need us to do.We had enter the WTO and we are facing more challenges and chances.China need more friend in the world stage.Our different dialects are the symbols of our country and nation.We should let all of the world know the beautiful of our nations.We must feel proud of ourselves and our nations.There still have some countries who are ready to laugh at us or covet our country.We need to protect our nations and let us know that our China is not easy to devide. On the other hand,dialects are the production of the scattered nations.They're informal and have intensive locally.We can not know clear about some of the dialects and some even can't understand.In the public places,communication is very important and concerns in polite.Just imagine that,if two teams want to cooperate,they need to discuss the project and make the ideas,but they can not share the opinions if they speak the dialects and can not understand each other.The language we usually use is Mandarin.Only we speak the normal chinese,we can understand each other better. All in all,dialects also have their own advantages and disadvantages.The only things we need to do is to protect our China.As for the dialects,we can speak it at the lifetime and part of the worktime.It is very imprtant to notice when we can speak dialects and when we must use normal chinese.If we can do this good,our China will get a progress.
