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With the increase levels of the life, people find the food more easier than before. the various of food in our life and become easier to prepared, so the easier -food is important to be part of the people’s daily life. Easier-food improve the people life. At first, people can spend their short time to prepared the food for save the time, nowadays many people do work is very busy, they can change and increase efficient in work by save the time. The same time the easier-food bring people very convenient. It is very better that the easier-food liberate the housewife in housework. Many women can gain relax and they use it their amateur time to do any things. In the other hand, the easier-food has a bad impact on person. For example, people eat easier-food every day lead to body changed, people more and more fat in general, especially the child. In pace with the easier-food cultural develop, people do not meal in their home and their have not many times to eat with families together, the family activities have be reduced. Many foods appeared, such as quick–frozen dumpling etcetera. Once eaten more those food the body will be get harmed In short, no matter the easier-food have more advantages and disadvantages for people. It is important that easier-food improve the different ways people life. We should appropriately look upon the easier-food.
