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内容：本人在12月15日到22日在纽约举行的展览会期间了解到贵公司产品号为5670的新产品，非常感兴趣，请贵方发给我们一份价格单和说明书。感谢贵方的合作，希望我们可以建立贸易关系。
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1．price list and instruction价格单和说明书
2．establish business relationship建立贸易关系
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Send to:KPOHsales@hotmail. Recive from:hubin@163. Dear Carnon, I am Hubin as the manager of Sony Company in China,I was very interested in the new Product 5670 your company showed up on the Exbiment in NewYork between Octorber 15th and 22nd.I will be so appreciate that if you can send me the price and instruction of the product,moreover,we will enjoy the co-opeation and establish business relationship soon.I wish I would hear from you soon. your secierely, Hubin
