2012年12月英语六级作文真题(II):人与电脑

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Computer and Man As the time goes on,computers become a very important part of our lives.It makes our lives very convinence. First,computers change the way our speak.People can use computers connecting others from a very long distant in a monent . Second,computers help us to get more information.Everyone can use the internet to sreach for the information they want in a simple way . And it makes our lives colorful. Third,computers is one of the important part of our work.Nowadays,mostly of jobs need people use the computers to finish.And it makes our working quicker and quicker .People can do more work when they use computer to help. Computers are very useful to our life.