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My hometown My hometown was a very beautiful city in the past.There were many green threes around it. The clean river seems like a mirror. Lots of fish was swimming in it.The simple houses and blocks are standed there.People were very happy and worked with smile. However,time went by,things are different. Today,the huge buildings are built and can be seen everywhere. Things get worse and worse. The big and the little cars running on the highway. The environment seems too bad. Threes can't be seen anywhere,fish gets less and less... It is the polution that should be change at once.Isn't it?We all want to have a beautiful city and a comfortable life.
