2012年12月英语六级作文真题(II):人与电脑

文中词汇表达比较多样，能多用学术词汇就更好了；作者应适量增加从句的使用量；衔接成分太少，文章结构欠佳。

with the development of the society,the contacts of the computer and man become more and more stick. and the computer also plays a important part in man' life. Man use the computer to get in touch with somebody ,who will use some apps such as QQ. and many people get some newest news by reading on the computer ,Computer make the way of getting information for man becomes more convenient ,and the number of the news also are larger.Some men do the business on the computer ,the number in the screen even decide how much they will get. The advantages that computer give us are too much..However, some people also suffer the disadvantages the computer brings.For it ,many people don't want to speak with others,in that the ability to talk with others is getting down .and someone also don't care about the thing outdoors. and the worst things is the people who use the computer in a long time will get some disease of head and neck and so on. That's bad. All men should know that computers can be our tools or friends,it is depend on how you use it. People should get a right position for the computers,Only it ,computer can company men forever and healthily.