有效地采用了多种衔接方法,层次清晰;能够熟练使用从句并合理分配;作者能较灵活准确地使用词汇表达,更能较熟练地使用一定的学术词汇;可以适当增加副词的使用。
Hundres of thousands of people in china take various exams to get the qualifications,on this issue people's opinions differ sharply. Some people hold the positive view,they say that in such a competive society,more qualifications could bring them more chances to get a better job. Other people hold the opposite view,however,they say that,taking many exams coductied at various levels will take their much more time,besides,whether to get a better job or not depends upon a persons real ability,rather than some certifications. As long as I am concerned,I am incline to agree the former point of view,although the certification cannot fully show a person's ability,it is a universal norm to evaluate a person,we should make the full use of every minute to enhance our ability,and get the certifications to prove it.