题目:Computer and Man人与电脑
字数:150满分:100分
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Computer and Man With the development of technologe in the modern time, the computer have become more and more popular, they also have been a part of our life. Some people hold the view that computer have replaced people in many occupations, and they do much works which people can not do, besides, computer always be more efficient and convenient than people. So these people claim that the unemployment rate will improve year by year. But other people hold the opposite view, they think there are still much work that computer can not do , people's brain have more activities, can change with the environment, but computer is a special procedure which has been set in advance, it can not deal with the unsure circuments. As far as I‘m concerned, there are a lot of difference between computer and man, but they both have their own advantages which can not be replaced. We can use computer in a appropriate way, but don't ignore the effects of people.