拼写做的很棒,在平时练习中注意词汇量的积累;作者句法知识很棒,适当增加从句的使用,会取得更不错的成绩;上下文衔接不流畅,文章结构不严谨。
Recently,the fact that some cities took the pollution tax for private cars has become a popular phenomenon,especially developing countries,heated dates are right on their way.Some people approved to this matter and other don't think so.As a student,I agree that government should be taxed for private cars. On the one hand,it developed to protect the environment.If government takes the tax,owners will reduce driving numbers.It brings more benefit of traffic jam and environment pollution.On the other hand,government has money to build more traffic stations for human survival.There is more money to create harmonious society. As far as I am concerned,this matter has hundreds of benefits and none of disadvantages.Harmful gases hurt our life so we should improve it.
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