高一英语作文模拟题:我的家乡

文中词汇使用较丰富，学术词汇使用要加强；作者可适当增加词汇的丰富度，部分句子有错误；衔接成分太少，文章结构欠佳。

As time goes by,my hometown has changed a lot. Several years ago,there were so many green trees that I often played with my friends under them.A river through the town had clean water in which fish can swim freely.but at that time,the houses that we lived were simple and small. Street was not wide enough.people worked hard but still got little money....... But now everything has changed.more and more modern buildings appear in the city.many kinds of cars are running in the road.However science and technology also had their disadvantages.for example:the number of the trees and fishes is decreasing fast,the problem of pollution has aroused People’s concern.