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Football is my favorite sport.One day I picked up a football by chance on the way home.And I started to play it with my friends. From then on,the football became a part of my life.I often play it with my classmates after school.Sometimes we also have a competition.I have learned a number of skills.Among all the football stars,I like Beck ham best,and I hope I can be a professional football player in the future. I am training hard for my goal now.