小学二年级英语作文:Our house

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I have two apartments located in Taoyuan city. I bought them by my own. I would say I am a successful business person in my field, and working hard really gave me a lot of benefits such as buying a car, a house......, but I am not a selfish person as people always think rich people are frugal, however, I always try my best to donate some stuff to help those people what are really in needs.