高一英语作文模拟题:我最喜欢的运动

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My favorite sport Every one has hobbies. Such as swimming, fishing,basketball and so on .My favorite sports is playing football . I was fond of football by chance.One day,when I walked on the way home after school, I found a ball. It interested me.Then I played it with my classmates who went home with me.It was the first time that I had played football .To my sueprise,I fell in love with it. Then,I tained it with my classmates everyday and we competed with each other to improve our skill . Do you know Brekham?He is a famouse football star who came from England and I am his devoted fan.It is my dream that is to be a professional football player like Brecham. I will work hard to make it come ture.