小学一年级英语作文:Good friend

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My good friend is a boy, his name is Jake Zhao. He has a big head and smile face, he is ten years old and he is in 10 class 3 grade. He often dresses a blue jacket and blank trousers. He likes to play football and rides the bicycle.