赞同:
重现该园辉煌景象;
中华文明具体体现;反对:
保留原样更为合理;
警醒人们不忘过去;参考词汇:
故宫 the Palace Museum;颐和园 the Summer Palace
文中词汇表达较丰富恰当,但学术词汇稍显不足;作者句法不错,但是文章整体句子稍微偏短;不能熟练使用过渡词,文章结构欠佳。
Yuanmingyuan. “Garden Of all gardens”, was burnt down in l860. Recently my classmates had a discussion about whether it should be rebuilt or not.In my opinion, it should not be rebuilt. there are two reasons as follow. first,keeping it will help people remind his critic and miserable history,which can encourage people to treasure today's life and strive for our country's prospect. if we rebuild it ,people may forget it slowly with time flying. secondly,the Yuanmingyuan shows the Chinese traditional culture the same as the Palace Museum and the summer palace. every corner of them boast the past Chinese charm so they are worth being protected and preserved. only by this Chinese culture can be passed on. as what i mentioned , i argued that Yuanmingyuan should not be rebuilt .