- 分享到:
学术词汇需要继续积累，单词拼写不错；作者句法知识较为扎实，可增加复合句和从句使用；文章结构不够严谨，应增加过程性词汇的使用。
What is ambition? Different people have different ideas about this topic.Joseph Epstein, a famous American writer, gave his reply as he said, “We decide what is important and what is trivial in life. We decide (so) that what makes us significant is either what we do or what we refuse to do. No matter how indifferent the universe may be to our choices and decisions, these choices and decisions are ours to make. … In the end, forming our own destiny is what ambition is about.”In my opinion,I agree with Joseph. Life is a series of choices and decisions. Of course, you cannot choose your parents, your color, your race or your nationality. Nor can you decide the strange language you use while you are a baby, or the kindergarten you go to when you are a kid. They are choices and decisions of your parents. But as you grow up, you begin to make your own decisions. You choose the brand and style of your shoes, you choose the girl or the boy you date with, you choose the cat or the dog you keep as a pet and you choose the college or university you go to and the major you like. What is critical here is that you should make sure that you are the decision maker of your own life and do not pass on the right to others, even your parents, because, as Joseph said, ambition is to form your own destiny. We should have our own thoughts and give ourselves a chance to do the things we like but not to follow the ideas that parents give.When we have to do some things,we need to follow our heart and try our best to do it.Attitude is everything and we should never give up. Actually, a number of personalities in history at both home and abroad went against the will of their families and risked being discarded by them, but they had scored tremendous success in the end. Chairman Mao Zedong is a case in point. When he was young, he plunged himself into the tide of revolution in China, though his father objected to his choice. Finally, Chairman Mao fulfilled his ambition and led Chinese people to success. To sum up,I just want to say,follow your heart and you will be a big potato and have a happy life.
