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2001年1月英语四级作文真题:如何面试成功

发布时间:2013-05-14 18:40浏览次数:1165
要求:
Directions: For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write a composition on the topic How to Succeed in a Job Interview? You should write at least 100 words, and base your composition on the outline (given in Chinese) below:
1. 面试在求职过程中的作用
2. 取得面试成功的因素
用户的作文(系统评分43.0分
评语:

文中如若增加一些长难句的使用,会为文章添彩;行文稍显不流畅,应增加文中衔接词的使用;文中词汇表达不够丰富,且有较多拼写错误。

用户练习作文:

As we all kwon,it is comme to be interviewted when we are find a job.beause of interviewing make a great role in the compare.In the one hand the compare could have a good kwon to the intervier by interviewing.In the other hand the intervier could see the compare' situation. As for the intervier,how to succeed in a job interview/At the first,we are supposed to kwon the situation of the compare.Then conforce is also a imporsant for us.Last but not least honest is needed. I strongly think that if we can do these things we can succeed in the job interview.

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