文中如若增加一些长难句的使用,会为文章添彩;行文稍显不流畅,应增加文中衔接词的使用;文中词汇表达不够丰富,且有较多拼写错误。
As we all kwon,it is comme to be interviewted when we are find a job.beause of interviewing make a great role in the compare.In the one hand the compare could have a good kwon to the intervier by interviewing.In the other hand the intervier could see the compare' situation. As for the intervier,how to succeed in a job interview/At the first,we are supposed to kwon the situation of the compare.Then conforce is also a imporsant for us.Last but not least honest is needed. I strongly think that if we can do these things we can succeed in the job interview.