小学一年级英语作文:Good friend

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My good friend is Tom . He is a boy. He is 10 --year--old. He is tall and thin. He and I are in the same class . And he is a good student. He is good at maths. He like to play foot ball.After school,he usually play foot ball with us on the playground . This is my friend.