托福Toefl作文模拟题附范文 第52篇:草率的判断是否可信

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I am totally approval of the idea that snap judgements can never be trusted, I strongly believe this view fit in every condition. First of all, a snap judgement is usually a imprudent one, Take Edison as an example, before he finally invented the electronic light, he had made countless experiments.