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托福Toefl作文模拟题附范文 第51篇:住在乡下是否比城市好

发布时间:2013-08-19 17:03浏览次数:5942
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作文题目:

Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? 

Some people claim living in a rural area is better than living around a lot of people.

Use specific reasons and details to support your answer.

有人说住在乡下会比城市好。你怎么看?给出具体原因。

字数要求:300字以内。

用户的作文(系统评分86.0分
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词汇表达灵活多样请继续保持,不过学术词汇的积累还有很大的空间;熟练使用了一些长难句;文章采用了适当的过渡词和衔接词,结构比较严谨。

用户练习作文:

When asked about my preference between living in a big city and living in the countryside, I will undoubtedly admit that big cities are of more attraction to me. From my point of view, the advantages of living in a big city are as follows: First, with the development of economy, big cities provide more opportunities for our youths both in education and occupation, which will help us to be qualified to adapt to the fast rhyme and fierce competitions of current society, and a wider choice of jobs means it is easier to move up the career ladder.Second, big cities offer much more convenience than countryside, such as advanced traffic-system, a variety of restaurants and all kinds of shopping malls. Thanks to all these, our burdens of daily routines are relieved. Last but no least, living in a big city means leading a modern and colorful life. Due to the highly development of modern technology, especially the Internet and smartphone, Having a smartphone with WIFI, you can listen to music, have a chat with friends who live far from you and enjoy playing simple but interesting games, there are various entertainment options for those who live in big cities. They can spend their leisure time watching movies, surfing the Internet and doing sports in gym. As the proverb goes, every coin has two sides. There’s no doubt that living in a big city can bring some frustration now and then. However, It’s undeniable that big cities are leading the trends of modern life. I really think the advantages of living in a big city far outweigh the disadvantages.

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