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托福Toefl作文模拟题附范文 第52篇:草率的判断是否可信

发布时间:2013-08-19 17:06浏览次数:17572
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作文题目:

Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? 

Snap judgments can never be trusted.

Use reasons and examples to support your opinion.

草率的判断不可信。你同意这种说法吗?给出原因和例子。

字数要求:300字以内。

用户的作文(系统评分77.5分
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拼写做的很棒,在平时练习中注意词汇量的积累;能够熟练使用从句并合理分配;全文结构较为严谨,应适当增加文中衔接词的使用;请注意分段。

用户练习作文:

I disagreed with the point that Snap judgements can never be trusted. Judgement I thought can divided into two groups, mental and physical. In my passage, Mental Judgement means that judgement made by your logic, your observation which make you can get the conclusion, and in this aspect. Snap Judgments have more chance that would not be trusted, but I'm insisted that it's still possible that can be trusted. And in the physical judgements I defined , as a reaction based on your body's system, or something that make your do the reaction, like the recent really hot news that mother rushed to the downstair to catch her baby falling in the five-tall building, and she just can run down the stairs in only 5 seconds. So in my defining physical snap judgements, I think it can be trusted. because it does not based on logic, which depend on our instinct. So I have to say in the end that , everything can not be sure if we don't have deeper classify.

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