2011年高考英语卷写作表达题目范文汇总(110):英语日记

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Apirl 20th Tuesday Fine I had a very beautiful day. At first, I devoted myself to doing my homework and finished it soon.Then, I decided to go to the movies. It was sure that I would enjoy myself exactiy. On the way to the film, I found a foreigner who seemed nervose.I am interested in it, so I went in front of him. "Can I help you?What is the matter with you?" I asked him. However, both us could not understand each other. I tried my best to make him understand me with my body laungage. Happily, we knew each other in the end. In fact, he wanted to go to the People's Park.So I stopped a taxi and told the driver the place which he wanted to arrive in. It made me be proud of myself.Then I realized my film,so I went to the cinemer.