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Recently, our class manners play an important role in international communication, thus improving national culture be imperative topics for discussion Improve the quality of people can have better accomplishment, can have the rich cultural and recreational activities, can the construction of spiritual civilization have better. Drink cup, tissue paper, plastic bags, paper scraps discarded everywhere, even to take leave of these things all over the reservoir, around the plug, not timely cleaning and garbage into the garbage room