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I introduce the novel "millions of pounds" to your classmates Novels: millions of pounds Author: Mark Twain Synopsis: the story of a America poor boy Henry Adams in London adventure. A London two millionaire bet, put a piece of broken million check to Henry, see him how close in a month. A month later, Henry not only not starve or arrested, but became a millionaire, and won the love of a pretty lady. The language style: humor, satire