内容:本人在12月15日到22日在纽约举行的展览会期间了解到贵公司产品号为5670的新产品,非常感兴趣,请贵方发给我们一份价格单和说明书。感谢贵方的合作,希望我们可以建立贸易关系。
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1.price list and instruction价格单和说明书
2.establish business relationship建立贸易关系
能较灵活地使用部分学术词汇,有基础拼写错误,需要注意一下;文章上下文衔接自然;句法知识较好,但需加强句式变化;请注意分段;连词使用偏少。
Dear company, I have been to your display meeting this december from 15 to 22,which was held in New York.It's very pleased that I learnd about the product number of your company is 5670,and I was interested in it.Therefore,Would you like to send me the price list and instruction.Thank you for your cooperation,and I hope we can establish business relationship. I'm looking forward to your early reply. Yours, HuBin