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Now broadcast the news In order to increase the students understanding of the Chinese space, your school will hold a lecture The theme of the seminar China space Speaker: Professor Li Bo of Peking University. Time: January 5th, Thursday afternoon at 2:30. The location is the school hall Will introduce the background, brief history China space development, development of the Shenzhou series of spacecraft and astronauts China.