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Everybody is good, I will lead you to visit Nanjing Nanjing is located in the southeast of Chinese, is the capital of Jiangsu Province, has a population of about 5000000. Is a populous city. Nanjing has 2400 years of history, there have been 10 dynasties established their capitals here. In the history is also very famous. Nanjing is very beautiful, there are many places of interest, such as Xuanwu Lake, Jiming temple, Stone City and so on, it also has many modern factories and tall buildings. Welcome to visit Nanjing.
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