甘肃武威六中2013届高三第二次模拟试卷英语作文

能够很好的使用长难句且句法很棒；恰当的使用了过渡词和衔接词，衔接手法做的很棒；作者能较熟练、灵活地使用词汇，建议要多使用学术词汇；请注意分段。

Some students think Internet slang should not be forbidden,because Internet slang is vivid,fashion and it is also filled with humorous and intelligence,which makes online chat more convenient. However,the others consider that Internet slang is lack of thinking and can not be understood or axpected by the most part of people. If we use them too much,many people will not understand us,even will misunderstand us. In my opinion, as every coin has two sides,Internet slang both has its advantages and disadvantages.Therefore,we should make a right attitude towards it, which can help us make full use of its pros and reduce its crones.