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August 24th,2006
Dear Cathy,
I like your program very much. _____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Yours Sincerely，
Wang Ping
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I love watching the "SHOOL ENGLISH"program very much.I think your program's assessment is so full and wonderful.Because it inciudes many kinds of programs like stories,games and English songs.So we spectitors could incase our words and improve our listening-speaking.Then ,by watching your program I can learn the Western cultures but also it's helpful for us to know of English customers. But I don'd think yours' on time is enough for us.To my oppinion,it's better to extend the show's time.And I'm expecting the more show times every week.
