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高一英语作文模拟题:向游客介绍南京

发布时间:2013-05-16 16:02浏览次数:4381
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假定由你负责接待一个外国旅游团。请你拟定一篇发言稿向游客介绍南京。要点如下:
1. 南京位于中国东南部,是江苏省省会,人口约500万。
2. 南京有2400多年历史,曾有10个朝代在此建都。
3. 南京很美,有许多名胜,如玄武湖、鸡鸣寺、石头城等,还有许多现代化的工厂和高大的楼房。
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文中词汇表达比较多样,能多用学术词汇就更好了;作者有一定功底,可在平时练习中增加长难句的记忆;行文较为流畅,作者文中过渡词使用的不错;请注意分段;可以适当增加副词的使用。

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Cultural City In addition to historical sights, memorials, museums and cultural sights also attract thousands of travelers. The famous Confucius Temple (Fuzimiao) is not only a memorial place for the Great Sage in China but has a surrounding area bustling with shops, restaurants and a snack street housed in traditional Chinese architectural buildings. In the city center, Nanjing Museum is a must for travelers with a collection of more than 420 thousand pieces, including about 2,000 that are rare and valued. The observatory on Zijinshan Mountain to the east of the city center was the first modern observatory built in China. Qin Huai River , in the southwest of the city, extends one hundred kilometers. The river used to be the most flourishing part of Nanjing in the old days. In many Chinese novels, it is renowned as a place which nurtured beauties and romance. Today, it is a place for people to recall the old splendor of this historical city. Like all sights in Nanjing, it tells the story of past, present and future for the city.

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