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Sports in our school Sports in Our SchoolHello everyone,I am a reporter from the school newspaper,now I am reporting in front of the playground.Students in our school have had more time for sports since the activity started.Most students exercise for more than four hours a week.Usually they play basketball and volleyball,for girls,they usually play tennis and badminton,almost everyone enjoys sports as a very important part of their life and their health has improved a lot.Some teachers also think the plan helps their study.Happiness is everywhere because of the students who are playing sports.What a happy day!
