作者词汇量偏少,也有些单词拼写错误;作者句法不错,但是文章整体句子稍微偏短;衔接成分太少,文章结构欠佳;请注意分段。
As I began to learn English,I have lots of recept.The first recept is it's very interesting.It's different from Chinese .It has it's special language future.It's easy to intonation.I find a lot of fun in learning English.The second recept is it's very difficult,because my mother tongue is Chinese,and the English is strangeness for me to learn English,but I like learning it.The third recept is it's important,in the 21century English becomes more and more important.I can see lots of people make a speech in English.And English is the bridge for you to communicate with foreigner .Upwards is my recept for learning English.