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The weekend is coming. I will have a happy weekend On Saturday morning, I’m going to do my homework. And then, I’m going out to play with my friends. I’m going to the bookstore and read some books. In the evening, I am going to have dinner with my parents outside. On Sunday morning, I’m going to the library or do my homework. And then, I’m going to listen to music. In the afternoon, I’m going to go shopping with my mother. I like shopping very much. This is my happy and busy weekend. Do you like this weekend?
