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2010-2012全国中考英语试题汇编试题(20)写作:电子游戏的危害

发布时间:2013-07-09 18:33浏览次数:363
要求:

假如你叫刘畅,你的朋友小明因为沉溺于电脑游戏,成绩日益下降。作为小明的朋友,你很担心,并决定给他写一封e-mail ,帮助他改掉这个坏习惯,好好学习。


要点提示:
1、说明玩电脑游戏的利弊。
2、建议小明在课余时间多参加有意义的活动。

3、你对小明的期望。


要求:

1、字数:80词左右(开头与结尾已给出,且不计入总词数。)

2、文中不能出现真实姓名、校名等信息。

3、文中必须包括提示中所规定的要点,并可适当发挥。


参考词汇:

be addicted to 沉溺于 

用户的作文(系统评分79.5分
评语:

学术词汇需要继续积累,单词拼写不错;作者句法知识很棒,适当增加从句的使用,会取得更不错的成绩;过渡词和衔接词使用的比较不错;请注意分段。

用户练习作文:

Now more and more students always spend plenty of their time playing computer games. Some of them can even play from morning to night. How terrible it is!   Playing too much computer games has bad impacts in many ways. For one thing, if students often play computer games, they can't do well in their study, because they always think about the things in computer games instead of the knowledge in books. For another, Sitting before the computer for a long time will cause back pains and headaches. And the radiation from the computers can also do harm to our eyes and our minds. What's more, many students are so deeply attracted by some interesting computer games that they communicate less with their families and friends, which will lead to mental problems. Last but not least, some students prefer the fighting games. It is likely that they'll be violent in the real life. That is to say, those who usually play violent games may do crimes more easily. Therefore, the teachers and parents should work together to stop the kids from playing computer games all around the clock.

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