小学一年级英语作文:Good friend

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I had a good friend ,she is a girl . she had a long hair , two big eyes and a small mouse .She is a teacher ,she teach in English at middle school ,she is a wonder girl but she did not a boyfriend .I like her ,because she is my friend .