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作者能较熟练地使用词汇表达，一些学术词汇的使用也比较灵活；作者句法知识很棒，适当增加从句的使用，会取得更不错的成绩；上下文衔接稍显不流畅。
Recently,the fact that travelling is a common phenomenon and tourism is a booming business in China as increasing economy,especially among the young,heated debates are right on their way.So,whether many tourists may bring harm to the environment has become a controversial question.I think we should go sightseeing but keep a modest measure. On the one hand,many tourists go to a new city and they can bring many benefits.The popularity of the city can improve,as a result,it will attract more and more people to visit and propel development of economy.On the other hand,many tourists may bring some problems.In a record-high travelling,people crowded and product much rubbish to the famous scenic spot. As far as I am concerned, we can choose a record-low season to go sightseeing.Firstly,we should do for protecting the environment.Such as don't hurt status,obey regulations.Then,we should supervise other people and regulate their statements and actions.
