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文章词汇表达要更加熟练，希望能更多使用一些学术词汇；复杂句的使用不是很丰富；文章层次不够分明，缺少组织，需注意文章整体的组织结构。
With the development of society,and improve of people's life standard.More and more people would have a trip on holiday.And the cost of trave already have increase in the recent year. Some people think that it's good for increase GDP,and people think,it's difficult for the ordinary people.For them,the economic is the best way of the journey.Meanwhile,the ordinary people also think,that is how a wasting. In my opinion,the entertainment should take ordinary people into considerate,but not just for benefit of business.So,more and more people who like them could enjoy themselves.The government should involve in service. In short, I hope that more and more people enjoyment travel.
