2012年6月英语四级作文真题:过度包装的现象

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Nowdays, with the devoment of socity ,many shop start come to over Packing。This is no doubt that there are three reson.first, because of people‘s life become more and more better,people want to better beautful than before.Second, shoper in crder to appeal to comuter's eye,so that shoper take a lot of time to packing some goods. As far as im concerned, as people the pursuit of beautful,we should also be concerned some proplem about environment,because of the earth is our home,we must reply to the earth to life.we should be protect tree and flower,again for some goods's packing.I believe that a briage future is waiting us.