2012年12月英语四级作文真题:Education pays

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We can see from the pre form that different educational rank you are in the society will influence with your income.Having a high rank in education will give you more chance to find a satisified job,In addition,you can see how important role that education has in our society.But as far as I am concerned,having a high educational rank doesn't mean you will have a bright future.It just give you more chance.In other words,don't have a high educational rank doesn't mean you can't live a good life in the future.In my opinion,the most important is hard-working.A person who are hard-working will overcome every hardships in his or her live.