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And my, you know, love of science fiction actually seemed to be mirrored in the world around me, because what was happening, this was in the late 60's, you know, we were going to the moon, we were exploring the deep oceans. Jacques Cousteau was coming into our living rooms with his amazing specials that showed us animals and places and a wondrous world that we could never really have previously imagined. So, that seemed to resonate with the whole science fiction part of it.